Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Afternoon on a hill















Gibbs, Pilip. War Rins, Hill 60. Nov. 2008. The darkness of tunnels – Hill 60. The darkness of tunnels – Hill 60, 8 Nov. 2008. Web. 2 Oct. 2009. .


There are hundreds of trees around me. I feel like I am in paradise. There are hundreds of flowers. It's looks like an ocean of flowers and it's shinning. I can touch the air and it makes me comfortable. I can hear the birds singing from the trees. I can see flowers dancing around me.They are many types of flowers and they all are different colors. I see shades of red, blue and purple. It is so beautiful. It makes me want to cry.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Very nice
LOVIN' the picture. Overall good writing skill
I notice you made a LOT progress since you were here the first year...

Min Jeong Cho said...

I like that you use the word "paradise"